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Zoom Writing

Zoom out from a picture.
This is a shared writing task by zooming out, so to speak, by leaving comments. For example if the picture was a bowl, and the first commenter describes something bigger around the bowl (like a table it’s on) and the next commenter would write about the room it was in, and the next could zoom out the window and so on. The most important part is to ensure you read previous comments, so you can add to the story.

What is the story? “Zoom out” of the picture to reveal what you imagine is also a part of the story.

Please make sure you read previous comments and continue the story from the last comment posted.

13 thoughts on “Zoom Writing

  1. A boy carefully carried his small,delicate toy that his dad brought for him from China. Then suddenly he slipped and……

  2. he was spilling filthy dirt on her beautifully lush lounge room carpet. He thought to himself ‘No way! I need to find a way to keep my magical treasure safe’. Then, the perfect solution popped into his head….

  3. “Don’t even think about it! If I find it anywhere in this house, I will feed it to your pet dragon Daisy!” Then the boy……

  4. The park. While he was sitting on the bench in the park he saw a lamp in the bin. It looked magical then he………

  5. Felt dizzy and fell on the wet grass. When he woke up he realised that he was stranded on a island. Then from the corner of his eye he saw…

  6. a huge green eye was staring at him, his heart was pounding 100 miles an hour, sweat was beading on his forehead, he couldn’t move from the fear……

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