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Dangerous Journeys to school

Many children throughout the world have to take the most incredible and unimaginable routes in order to receive the education that some of us may take for granted.


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Click here to see how determined some children can be when it comes to getting an education.

The solution might seem easy: build roads and bridges, buy buses and hire a driver. However, the lack of funds and recurring natural disasters in many countries make it difficult to provide children with the solutions they so desperately need. Written by Julija K (Bored Panda.com)

After looking at the 25 different journeys to school (see link above), write a snapshot (in your draft book) telling the story of one of these students going to school or write a snapshot of how you get to school. When your draft is completed revise, edit and then publish as a comment on this post.

Posted in Writer's Workshop, Writing

Writing Buddies

Today the year 6’s had a Mega Writer’s Workshop focussing on using Writing Buddies to improve their writing. The Learning Gallery was buzzing and it was amazing to see how focussed the students were on helping each other, well done year 6’s! 🙂 

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The students generated the following guidelines for Author and Writing Buddy:

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* tell your buddy what you would like to improve on
* attentive listening
* record feedback given
* use feedback to improve writing
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* attentive listening 
   – show with body language
* give constructive feedback:
   – start with positive
   – what can they improve on? Make it clear and detailed (can use 6 + 1 traits to help)

   – end with a positive

All of the students took on the role of Author and Writing Buddy. They gave and received constructive feedback about their writing and then used the feedback to improve their pieces.

Why is it important to receive feedback from others about our writing?

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Ideas writing trait

Today we read Grandpa’s teeth by Rod Clement. We used it to focus on the trait of Ideas
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While reading it aloud, we discussed how Clement has taken a simple plot about a stolen item and used intriguing details to create a wacky mystery. We used the story as inspiration for students to write their own goofy mystery, using creative idea development details to describe characters and objects in their story.   

The students used prompts for who gets robbed, what gets stolen and who is the suspect?

Click on this link to generate ideas for writing your own mystery – Interactive choices for writing 

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Battle Bunny

Today we read a fantastic book called ‘Battle Bunny’ by Jon Scieszka and Mac Barnett. It is a fun example of how we can revise our writing. We all enjoyed the story and the students were inspired to revise their own writing and change their short stories by replacing, adding and removing text. When I asked the students to turn and buddy share their work the buzz in the room was fantastic.

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6K,  what did you think of this book?

What did you find out during the Writer’s Workshop?

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Remembrance Day Poetry

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How did you feel listening to the poem?

What words are used in the poem to convey feeling and emotion?

What images does the poem evoke?

Does the poem rhyme or not? Did you notice any patterns in the poem? E.g. verses or line structure.

Write your own short poem about Remembrance Day. 

If you need more inspiration you might like to read ‘For the fallen’ by Laurence Binyon – click on picture below to read the full poem.

http://allpoetry.com/For-The-Fallen

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Posted in Geography, Writer's Workshop, Writing

25 most dangerous journeys to school

children-going-to-school-around-the-world-35Many children throughout the world have to take the most incredible and unimaginable routes in order to receive the education that some of us may take for granted.

Click here to see how determined some children can be when it comes to getting an education.

The solution might seem easy: build roads and bridges, buy buses and hire a driver. However, the lack of funds and recurring natural disasters in many countries make it difficult to provide children with the solutions they so desperately need. Written by Julija K (Bored Panda.com)

After looking at the 25 different journeys to school (see link above), write a snapshot (in your draft book) telling the story of one of these students going to school or write a snapshot of how you get to school. When your draft is completed revise, edit and then publish as a comment on this post (don’t forget to type into word first).

 

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Haiku Poems

Today Safiya taught 6K more about Haiku poems.

Haiku-Definition

Here are some examples, please post a comment telling us what you think of the poetry;
 
On ride with bestie,
People Screaming like crazy,
Do not look down!
(By Maddy)
 
Wave crashing on rocks,
Salt water making lips dry,
surfers ride the waves.
(By Ainslie)
 
My new PS4,
Me in joy and excitement,
Victory in joy,
(by Dhruvil)